Learning Log Entry One

My first peper was on emerging adult hood in this paper I discussed the importance on emerging adult hood.
After this paper was graded I realized that my writing is strong but needs a lot of polishing to become great. One thing I realized was that one my grammar needed work and my use of commas was very inappropriate also I need to learn how to work harder to fulfill length requirements. On the bright side I demonstrated excellent word choice and good understanding of the topic as well as great flow in my writing I think these traits as well as the ones that I’m working to improve will really propel my writing to the next level and help me become a more professional and skilled writer. This was the first entry in my learning log.